tigeraye

thank you for reading. I think Toby's development is that he's gotten a bit more hotheaded compared to as he was before, and at this point he doesn't like things ...

hey, the first chapter in the Kite Runner is two pages!! jk, thanks for reading, I appreciate it a ton ^^

Thanks ^^

thanks so much for your feedback!!! i made some edits based on your suggestions

why wont anyone review this excellent story

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the next chapter will be up in the year 2036

...that should say adding characters, not adding chapters XD

Well, perhaps I did get overly-ambitious when it came to adding chapters. I actually drafted this story twice before, and the first time I drafted it Chuck didn't exist, Jean-Luc ...

thank you for reviewing :) i estimate the last chapter will be around 45-50.

I had a breakthrough today. 35 and 36 coming by Monday, prepare yourself

I really want to get to chapter 36 but the next part is proving difficult, so it might be a while. I've already written it like 3 times and it ...

no worries

no worries. hopefully you can find the motivation to pick back up where you left off, but my advice is to not force yourself to write something you don't have ...

i keep forgetting to say, thanks again for all the feedback for the parts. I definitely wouldn't ask anyone to read or review these parts because of how dark it ...