tigeraye

yeah ive decided i don't like this very much and probably won't continue. ty for reviewing.

i haven't forgotten about this by the way. been a little busy but i'm going to try and read the next parts soon

This was devised as five separate 10k word stories. This is the end of the first. I have the next two already written but both are in need of heavy ...

Make sure you pm me when you upload the next chapter so I can read it

I really like the narration in this. Was the main character supposed to be schizophrenic? They're paranoid, and a bit of an outsider, but that's what makes them interesting.

well spoiled isn't a character trait i had in mind for ethan, so that's disappointing :( thank you for reviewing anyway

It's okay, I'm not offended. This was rushed on my end due to real life circumstances and I'll leave it at that. I definitely see where you're coming from, thank ...

And Claude stomping the spider is to show that he's not afraid of committing murder to get where he wants

Thank you for reviewing...didn't have much inspiration for this, honestly. I just woke up at 2 in the morning and wrote it to kill time. I've been struggling with religion ...

well, Claude's motivations do run deeper than "me want power"...he didn't just want to take over the world for himself, he wanted to take over the world with Ethan. In ...

haha, your reviews are so helpful, thank you. i made some edits.

made some edits

Thank you for your wonderful review -- I hadn't even thought of having someone mention the seer earlier than she appeared. As for Ethan and Rucy -- it wasn't so ...

thank you for the wonderful review

Thank you for reviewing. Claude's an asshole, to be blunt, and has a terrible temper. I don't know, he's a tough character to describe in a few sentences. I think ...