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Oh, and the next chapter introduces my personal favorite character, too.

heheh, I'm already at chapter twelve, just waiting a bit before doing edits. Not trying to rush, I'm just a fast typer x_x I'll message you when the next parts ...

Thanks for the review once again, it's appreciated as I wasn't very sure about this chapter. I split into two parts because once I finished, it was around 2000 words ...

heheh sorry x_x

Thanks for the help, guess I should've read over this more carefully x_x Fixed the mistakes you pointed out.

Well, I didn't mean to denounce your hard work, it's clear a lot of effort went into this story x_x So, Landon is supposed to be shy, but I didn't ...

Thanks again, I made a few changes.

ah, I just took the bit out altogether. Thanks for the help.

aw, I appreciate that. Getting something published is a long term goal of mine, so we'll see. It's mentioned they were outside the hospital in the first sentence, I guess ...

hmm. I'll think about how to change Dr. Pam's character for this scene to make sense, I don't want to do anything too drastic to the story. Thanks once more ...

thanks friend

thanks friend

Thanks again, I like reading these reviews x_x You bringing up the phone call gives me some ideas.

thanks friend

Thanks again. Ill edit this chapter later taking your advice in mind