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Thanks. I'm aware he didn't care about Bailey or Mr. Tyler getting in the cab, there's a reason for it :p

sorry if that came off as condescending or defensive, heheheh.

thanks friend :P Yeah, it's said why later on.

thanks once again! I'll make some edits tomorrow :p I love the imagery here and this big pretty metaphor, I'm just not sure how it fits in with what's going ...

Thanks friend, you too :p All the Sanguinem stories I did were done in one sitting, and the third was done at 5 AM so I know they're not as ...

Thanks again for the review. and yeah, I'm trying to keep all the chapters at around 1000 words x_x I probably should have mentioned this in the last chapter, but ...

Thanks for the review, I'm happy you liked it :p Mario is one of my favorites too, heheh.

heheh, I don't plan on rewriting it. Just something I'd do differently is all :p

thanks friend. Yeah, I guess I could've described the settings more thoroughly, but when I read I tend to picture settings, and character descriptions on my own instead of what ...

thanks again. If I ever rewrote this I'd probably make Bert a woman for a better dynamic. I don't like how all the women in this story are the villains, ...

thanks :p

thanks friend. This is my favorite of the three stories, heheh.

thanks friend. I added some words to try to make it clearer where the characters are at.

and sorry if you didnt want to be told that too x_x

Nah, its fine, I'll take any reviews ^^ hm, yeah, I agree on this being not needed. I think I'll remove it and maybe include it later on in the ...