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Re: Hotel Serenity: Prologue
ah, thats different from Pretzelsticks review...thanks
Nov 22, 2015 -
Re: Sanguinem
Eeeeeeh if you want. The second is ok but the third is where I started losing direction lol
Nov 22, 2015 -
Re: Sanguinem
thanks. I wrote a few sequels but I dont like them as much as I like this one.
Nov 22, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 22 *
thanks
Nov 19, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 20 *
nah you're right. Previously I was working one chapter a time, to make each one a separate piece. Starting with I think chapter thirteen, I started writing multiple chapters at ...
Nov 16, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 20 *
x_x
Nov 16, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 20 *
thanks for all the reviews, you're amazing. I'm not running out of ideas for the story, I have it all mapped out already so there aren't any ideas needed to ...
Nov 16, 2015 -
Re: Last Ride
thanks friend. The man received the death penalty; towards the end, he's about to be executed for a crime he didn't commit.
Nov 16, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 20 *
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Nov 15, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 10 *
thanks friend
Nov 14, 2015 -
Re: Triple Kham - Chapter 1
hello, welcome to YWS. Would like to review this later when mind isn't so foggy, so storing it on profile, heheheh.
Nov 14, 2015 -
Re: Hotel Serenity: Prologue
ah. almost missed this because didn't get a notification, thanks friend. I've been wanting to do a mystery story set in a hotel, this was just a rough draft of ...
Nov 14, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1, Part 1 Goodbye, Sarah
ah, and it occurred to me after I already wrote the story that Ronnie is a she. My apologizes, heheheh.
Nov 14, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 9 *
thanks friend.
Nov 13, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 9 *
thanks friend.
Nov 13, 2015
