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Re: The Gift of Life
actually, no, Miles wouldn't sell the mansion. What he'd do is re-renovate it and rent out rooms to people for lower income. I think that makes more sense for someone ...
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: The Gift of Life
Thank you for reviewing, I appreciate it a ton. At the very beginning of the story, could you introduce Romero as "Romero DeTales"? Even though I knew that the nurse ...
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 17 *
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Dec 21, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 17 *
oh, its [quote*]TEXT[/*quote] without the asteriks
Dec 21, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 19 *
thanks for your reviews. I'm glad you liked these chapters, to be honest I'm not so sure I'm fond of these chapters as I wrote them all in a short ...
Dec 21, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 17 *
beige background quotes? What do you mean x_x
Dec 21, 2015 -
Re: The Gift of Life
thanks for reviewing... My biggest problem is that I tend to share work before it's ready, so it ends up having some errors like Jimmy and Lila's location, heheh...I fixed ...
Dec 20, 2015 -
Re: The Gift of Life
lol jimmy was handing out lemonade in New York, then they got on a plane to West Virginia and ended up in Virginia. How did I do that???
Dec 19, 2015 -
Re: Ascent Chapter 5
oh, well, you know, just because I found Brendon to be a jerk doesn't mean everyone who reads this will. In different ways, he did come off as really genuine ...
Dec 16, 2015 -
Re: Together
haha I really like the concept though, so I'd like to see what another draft of this would end up like. Sometimes when you write something, and then write it ...
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 8 *
About the purpose of Annie and Susie: Toby's father Walter, his last words were to tell Toby that he's never alone. I like to think that Annie and Susie being ...
Dec 14, 2015 -
Re: The Thing About The Cold
uh, thanks for reviewing. This was originally going to be longer, but I've had writers flu for like two weeks now x_x
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: The Thing About The Cold
thanks
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: The Thing About The Cold
dont worry heheh
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: The Cursed, Pt. 7
hello, just letting you know that I read through this and plan on writing a review on it... But since I didn't really get what was going on, I'm going ...
Dec 13, 2015
