tigeraye

When Kajal said, "If I have to use it again...", he was referring to the first time he tried to threaten Hakim with the straw doll. There was that chapter ...

can't tell if this chapter is any good or not, so feedback is definitely appreciated...chapter twenty seven should be up in a day or so...

the original thing here was that toby found mr. tyler with a bottle of booze or marijuana joint in his hands, but i felt like that would make him rather ...

good eye about the rain...I used it to set the scene but didn't give thought to the weather beforehand

ah, well I'll have to disagree with the gym scene not being necessary, as it gives a bit of characterization to the side characters that will become important later...Charles for ...

thanks for reviewing, i appreciate it. just thought i should clarify...... I wasn't aware that Toby lied. The only thing he could have lied about was his middle name. If ...

thanks friend.

thanks for reviewing. and yeah, I think you can go back to any conflict, and just about all of it is caused by either lust for money or conflicting beliefs; ...

one day

thanks for reviewing. Mr. Tyler is my favorite character. He's been part of the story since the very first draft I wrote, and I think he really portrays the idea ...

ah, well, I'd rather confuse you than bore you I guess. In a way it's always complimentary to get a review of almost any kind, because it means someone at ...

I'm curious, have you ever played Hotel Dusk for the DS? it's an excellent game, and this might as well be a fan fiction, heheh. The atmosphere is practically the ...

Different story, but......Toby is inspired to a point by Arnold from Hey Arnold, the way that he's sort of an every child. All the kids in Hey Arnold have their ...

thank you for reviewing. This was actually a start to Heartbeat Academy before, but I decided to take another route, and just rewrote another draft of this and turned it ...

heheh, I know who killed his dad...but that's my secret for now!! Thanks for all your reviews!!