tierra_rhys17

defintately Edward. Hes so much more protective, but can be understanding., He knows just how to express his love and has no conditions

thanks you guys, glad you enjoyed it!

I had some spare time on my hands so I figured I'd write something down. Let me know what you think :smt051 :smt035 Metamorphosis A caterpillar, imprisoned by the wings ...

Thanks for the help you guys! I really appreciated your help and tried to use as many tips as I could in this rewrite without changing my storyline. Hope you ...

This is just a preface to a story. It isn't very long, but please let me know what you think :D Rhys had never believed in a truly noble death. ...

I like the poem alot and I think the whole break up message is cery clear. However, the rhyme scheme varies in some places, and in my opinion would be ...

I really enjoyed it. The beginning grasped me quickly, and the length really didn't matter, I jsut wanted to read it. The coolest thing that I like about it was ...

The picture mentally was really great and reflected the kind of inner joy happiness. Having the scene by the ocean and even adding cigarettes and bud light made it seem ...

I felt like the poem started out really great. It caught my attention and the title really stood out and made me think about what it could possibly be about, ...

The poem expresses true emotion and really hits the heart to read it. I personally think that it is very good and enjoyed the rhyme scheme: instead of being in ...

:D Hi everyone im new to YWS adn so far I think its real awesome! Seriously, I got a welcome letter and tips and all. I like to write fiction ...