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Hmm...I guess that was a bit extreme. I'll think that over. There's a specific reason they got along as kids and not now. It'll be revealed later.

Thanks. That's exactly the effect I was going for. I just love it when family members are nothing like each other. I went for that effect in The Elements as ...

I just now put chapter 5, I had the prolouge and 4 chapters before.

You'll see the details as soon as you stop bugging me and give me time to write the next chapter. If you must have more, it doesn't appear you've read ...

Don't worry. You'll be appeased later, a lot of stuff happens that wasn't mentioned in the prophecy. It's complicated. I won't fill you in on details just yet. :)

I haven't taken chemistry(I'm in 7th grade), but I can say that the acid spoken of here is not like the acid used in, say, your chemistry class. That acid ...

Woah! I just was looking at my copy and noticed this at the bottom: The Cronus Chronicles: Book 1 Sweet! I'll look for the sequel now!

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It's not a sequel, just another chapter. HUGE difference there. If each chapter was a book, Erin Hunter would have hundreds out there. That would be freaky.

Woah...Thanks. I'd better get started on the next chapter soon!

1-Well, they all are 13, though the entire group of competitors may include some older people. These 4 particular people are all 13. PS The prolouge also gives a reason ...

Well, I first actually wrote this story (Condensed into six chapters) two years ago for school. A few months ago I posted another idea for this story on another website, ...

You skip around from past tense to present tense a bit, which you should fix. Other then that, this is very good.

Well, I'm not a fan of riming poetry, but this is fine. What exactly is this about? I don't understand.