thisismichelled

I really like these lyrics! Great job :) I'd love to see more work from you :) Very pop.

I really love this piece :) I would say maybe clean up the last verse (not language wise it just seems a little too in your face) but overall a ...

I like this poem and the subject matter. I think it is written well, save for the rhyming scheme. You need to decide if and where you will rhyme, maybe ...

I really like this piece, I would maybe look at the flow. I agree with the comma usage, I think if you edit that out it'll make the flow a ...