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Could you point out the spelling errors to me, because i used spell check and proof read it all and i wasn't aware there was any. Thanks.

Where did you take these pictures? It looks like a BEAUTIFUL place! I love green and wet!

Nova, thank you. I kept reading over that line, but I didn't know how to fix it! Now I do :wink:

Dear Love: Dear Love, Your Almighty Admirable, Why do you hate me so? Why do you deprive me Of the one thing I’ve ever wanted? No, Dear Cupid, You tricky ...

Haha. Kaedee, if you take the first letters from the words This Is Me (my username) it makes T.I.M. Tim! Hehe, I totally didn't even realize until I'd already picked ...

I'm ThisIsMe, but call me Tim please. No, I'm not a guy, haha. Be my friend! And read my story! I need all the help i can get! -Tim

Thanks Nike! I'm going to go back and fix that! Later... Lol -Tim

10 months earlier… All I can think about is David Gahan. He’s kind of sexy for an old guy, in my humble opinion. Just the other day I was riding ...

Brava! This is absolutely stunning! I love it! The only thing that, in my opinion, I would change is the very first line, adding an "ing" to "feel". Besides that, ...

"Julie," she whispered "can I sleep with you? I don't want to be alone tonight" First, after "she whispered" there needs to be a comma, and after tonight there should ...

forefinger rubbing the leather chair I sit in, where it's worn and gone soft from my finger, after years This is good. It shows a lot of description, but the ...

Heya Butterfinger! This is a great piece, and it portrays a bunch of emotion, but you're missing a bunch of punctuation. I understand you may have written it this way ...

Okay, I've changed the tense. I think it sounds better this way. If anyone sees a slip up please tell me! Thanks! I clench my fist and think: just stop ...