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Re: Somewhere Around Nothing
Hello, I REALLY liked this. It holds significant meaning. It could be sung, but most poems could be sung as well. Not that they would all sound good, but your ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Poem I wrote for my best mate
Hello Nicola! I really liked your poem. It spoke very simply and it seemed heart felt. Don't listen to what people say about it being "cheesey" or "the rhyme is ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Sixty Miles
Hey CoolCatElly! First of all, I really liked reading this. At first I didn't understand it. I then understood when I read your description. But, poetry needs to speak on ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Abortions.
To me, this piece is only opinion. And that's just fine because everyone has their opinions on different matters. This is a bold subject to speak on and you did ...
Jul 5, 2008 -
Re: I Would Like to Dream
I liked it a lot! It's very descriptive and speaks from the heart. However, I would like to see just a little more about the horrid feeling of waking up ...
Jul 5, 2008 -
Re: Rrashika- prologue
I have to disagree with you, Hobbes. It's not a horrible story idea. I think it's brilliant! Everyone has their let downs and their opinions. There's always going to be ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Sp-lit
I liked it :D It's really interesting how you connected with yourself. You're a good writer, although your piece has great potential as well. Your ideas are brilliant! But I ...
Jul 1, 2008
