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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Somewhere Around Nothing

    Hello, I REALLY liked this. It holds significant meaning. It could be sung, but most poems could be sung as well. Not that they would all sound good, but your ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Poem I wrote for my best mate

    Hello Nicola! I really liked your poem. It spoke very simply and it seemed heart felt. Don't listen to what people say about it being "cheesey" or "the rhyme is ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sixty Miles

    Hey CoolCatElly! First of all, I really liked reading this. At first I didn't understand it. I then understood when I read your description. But, poetry needs to speak on ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Abortions.

    To me, this piece is only opinion. And that's just fine because everyone has their opinions on different matters. This is a bold subject to speak on and you did ...

    Jul 5, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I Would Like to Dream

    I liked it a lot! It's very descriptive and speaks from the heart. However, I would like to see just a little more about the horrid feeling of waking up ...

    Jul 5, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Rrashika- prologue

    I have to disagree with you, Hobbes. It's not a horrible story idea. I think it's brilliant! Everyone has their let downs and their opinions. There's always going to be ...

    Jul 1, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Sp-lit

    I liked it :D It's really interesting how you connected with yourself. You're a good writer, although your piece has great potential as well. Your ideas are brilliant! But I ...

    Jul 1, 2008


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