thetraveler

stargazer , I really admire this peice, but I also have alot of constructive criticism. I think that the time you spent on this was not wasted, but I would ...

Here I am as requested :) Wow... that is amazing poetry for starters. Well done! The first stanza is a little odd-sounding, the rhythm is slightly off, but all of ...

Here I am because you asked :) I thank you for asking too... curbs the boredom pains I believe that your story (so far) is wonderful. The first sentance was ...

Hey, here's a review for you, whether you want it or not... Wow, what a fun read! I really thought that you captured the feel of the tense air and ...

If you want me to be entirely honest I thought that it was wonderful but it went a little fast. I don't know what story this is from but I ...