thethinkerofthoughts

My friend Tempest (somewhere above) said I should check this out, and I was not disappointed :) Good description, dialogue - very clear portrait of events in my mind. One ...

Why is it that when anyone shows a bit of a sad emotion they get labelled an "emo"? I'm sick of it! Just because Insomniac's been showing a bit of ...

I say this a lot when reviewing poetry but it doesn't necessarily have to make sense. I assume (correct me if I'm wrong) that the ? on the last line ...

Thanks for the critique of my stuff. I agree with most of what has been said previously about this poem in part, but I don't like to be too critical ...

:D Well done. Very poetic, kind of traditional in an old way, which (in contradictory terms) makes in fresh! Like many great songs and poems, it's simple- which is what ...

Very well written. Good imagery and appropriately gripping cliff-hanger, which I'm sure everyone's been saying. Will there be a part 2? I hope so based on the fruits of this ...