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  • Poetry » General, General Re: this is a poem

    Hello there! Your poem is fine actually. I like the repetition of 'this is a poem' but I don't really understand the point you are getting at. I suggest you ...

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Realistic Re: Highlight

    Its brilliant, using metaphorical words that highlights the feeling of regret and compassion. The stanza were expressed clearly and the usage of words are chosen perfectly. I really appreciate it, ...

    Jun 6, 2013


Russets and tangerine shades of old gold flushing the very outside edge of the senses ... deep shining ochres, burnt umber and parchments of baked earth—reflecting on itself and through itself, filtering the light.
— Guildenstern (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)