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Re: A Vampire Story CH.1
The quality of writing is average. Its very simply put, and doesn't really going into a great amount of detail. You don't exactly give a whole lot of description of ...
Jun 15, 2008 -
Re: Billy (part 1)
thanks, you've been extremely helpful. I know that my grammer is absolutely terrible, but i can never get myself to sit down and fix everything. I'm going to be putting ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: Billy (part 1)
This is the beginning to a book i have started. It doesn't make a lot a sense, and isn't extraordinarily interesting, but it is needed for the content for which ...
May 26, 2008 -
Re: Burned
This was well written, but what was the purpose? You depict a disturbing and traumatizing experience extremely well, but why? I respect the quality of the writing very much, but ...
May 26, 2008 -
Re: The Children's War
This is an incredibly well written novel. It follows the story of several members of a resistance movement who are fighting against the victorious Third Reich. The many plot lines ...
May 25, 2008
