thestarseye

Thanks guys. ^^ The advice really helps. I'm not sure if I'll go back and fix the whole immature rhyming thing because this poem is sorta boring to me at ...

It was very funny and if i may say so not boreing at all. The whole thing was awesome and i was laughing up until the last part. It was ...

It truly was amazing. The topic was great itself and the way you wrote it painted a beautiful picture. It was easy to see what you were saying and the ...

It was interesting yet simple. I liked it but the punctuation wasn't so great. I kinda wish you would of gone deeper into the dream itself.

You try and try, But in the end all you can do is cry. Sometimes things aren’t meant to be, Yet sometimes it’s not so easy to see. Quitters never ...