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theraven13

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Sad Story

    Thanks for the criticism. The probably wasn't the best poem to post first. I understand what your saying competely. This wasn't a sit dow and write for other people to ...

    Mar 20, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Moral Devour - My first poem

    It was really good, especially for your first poem. I loved the ending Death is a concept, It is a choice, My choice, And I will live. very passionate.

    Mar 20, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Guitar at Midnight

    That was really good. It was romatic and sexy. I love guitarists.

    Mar 20, 2008


Human minds are more full of mysteries than any written book and more changeable than the cloud shapes in the air.
— Louisa May Alcott