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  • Other » Literature, Realistic Re: a world of words

    i like this piece. It's rather inspirational and empowering, it kind of encourages one to be oneself and original by the use of their own words to mold the scuffs ...

    Nov 26, 2019
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Long Legs that Run for Miles Under the Stars

    ehhh,this is some work if i may say! I like the choice of words and their positioning, simple English but enough to bring out the aim of the piece. i ...

    Nov 26, 2019
  • Other » General, General Re: hell (alternative)

    Hello,erin05. I like your tittle, hell, it fills my mind with so much thoughts and expectations that I can't help but read through for it's content. Also the introduction gives ...

    Oct 31, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hidden Heir(Chapter 1)

    I like the fact that you have dedicated this piece to the descriptions of who seems to be the lead character. It gives a feeling of acquaintance as one goes ...

    Oct 30, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: One Hope Left

    Hello, I've liked the story although I think the setting is a little dim. Sofia is in so much boredom that as the audience I'm loosing the interest, however I ...

    Oct 29, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: How Do You Plead: 1.1

    I've really liked this piece. The story line and title "how do you plead" kind of argues me to read and maybe find out what exactly did the writer mean ...

    Oct 29, 2019


I have been impressed with the urgency of doing. Knowing is not enough; we must apply. Being willing is not enough; we must do.
— Leonardo da Vinci