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Re: I Hate Him *4* Part 1
Hello there. :) Not only did I have a heavy backpack that could make me fall over any second, I had the wind making me fall over. I slipped on ...
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Re: Draw Near To Me Chapter 3
Chapter 3 Jason sat down and opened his mouth comma about to say something when Garcia decided to start his lecture. I painfully turned my head to listen to Garcia’s ...
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Re: I love you
Hello there. :) As I walked down the hallowed halls of fourth floor Irvine Hall I heard music floating throughout the hall Period. I t seemed to be coming from ...
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Re: Edited Chapters 1-2 I think
Hello there, I'm here as requested. :) All I knew was that when I was ten comma he married some woman named Nina period. W e were invited to the ...
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Re: Tabooboo - A parody of Taboo
Whoa! That just literally made my day. :) It was amazing, and I laughed the whole time... Well I guess I'm not the first one to say this, but I ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Draw Near To Me Chapter 2
Hello there. :) I was jolted back into reality by my friend comma Celest. I babysat quite a bit and went to see my cousins in Houston. Somehow between being ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: The Closest Reason (working title) Chapter One
Hello there. :) Now they're not planning their wedding, or picking out baby name’s, they just aren’t living in a teenage fantasy romance. he wrapped his arms around Zoey and ...
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Re: Secrets: Chapter One, Part One
Hello there. :) My mother had walked the same isles, along with her mother and her mother. My mom was currently in California for four years on a business trip. ...
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Re: I Hate Christmas Parties
Hello there. :) The visage arranged on my face shattered and turned into a frown. I turned my head in the opposite direction. I would use another word then visage... ...
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Re: Have Faith in Me *EDITED*
Hello there. :) I had loved her for so long. There's still a few mistakes here, but I'm not going to say them all, because I don't really have time ...
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: I Hate Him *3*
Hello there. :) But, some parts I found interesting, it’s just that the beginning was really take off the comma here. boring. Then by the end comma they both die ...
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: Snowflakes outside of the Window
Hello there. :) This is a really good short story. I like how this is short and sweet, but we still get the details we need. I would like, however ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: Draw Near To Me
Hello there. :) That ' s how it is for me. My name is Alison Meadows and I am in love with Jason Bentley. I'm tired of admiring him from ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: Prom Disaster *2*
Hello there. :) Lucas started to walk up to me as I took a big step back. "Because I love you; not the best friend love period M ore you ...
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Re: Swallow
Hello there. :) Each time I walked with Mother comma my attention tugged at her dress and she would ignore it like a strand caught on a fence. Mother should ...
Dec 24, 2010
