theotherone

Hey there! I thought this story was interesting. First of all, I didn't think the story really had a plot. I found it a little bit boring at times because ...

Hey there! Okay, so I haven't written a review in almost two years and just got back to this site, so we'll see if I still have it. ;) First ...

Hello there, I'm here as requested. :) I want to state that I'm not the greatest with poetry, but I'll try my best. drifting softly in the breeze. I think ...

Hello again. :) Mistakes. I regretted it much. I shouldn't have come in the first place. It had been because of the king's son, who's name was Frederick, an old ...

Hello there, I'm here to review as requested! :) I'm so sorry about the time it took me to do it, but with all the changes in YWS, now I ...

Hello there. :) I see that Hockey Fan has pointed out quite a few things concerning the story, so I apologize in advance if I repeat some of it myself. ...

Hello there. :) Normally, I begin my reviews with all the nitpicks I found, but it seems that Hockey Fan already got most of them. Therefore, I'll try to do ...

Hello there. :) This was a great story and I can totally relate to it, since I created myself the perfect guy in my dreams when I was young. Really ...

Hello there. :) I'm here to review, so I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression on the story. I never knew if she realized ...

Hello there. :) I'm here to review, of course. So here we go. His gaze swept over the length of my body and a chill ran up my spine. This ...

Hello there, I'm here to review as requested. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks, and then move on with my overall impression on your story. I wheeled around to find ...

Awesome chapter, as usual. Wow, Please write the other one really fast. Like right now? :) Plot wise, this is great. I love the sexual tension between these two. We ...

I always picture the scene in my head, imagine the guy before me, touching and kissing me. I write what I feel afterwards, and add some details about how the ...

Hello there. :) I am so sorry for what happened to you. I don't know what it feels like to loose someone so suddenly and not have time to say ...

Hello there. I'm here to review your poem as requested. :) Here's pretty much the only nitpick I found that hasn't been mentioned Because our love no longer lives, I ...