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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Letters of the Distressed

    I liked the concept but the story was confusing.The repition of the emails was what confused me the most. I read the story thoroughly, but I can't make heads or ...

    Sep 25, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Bloody Quill

    Great short story. Left me begging for more. There needed to be more parts with Conner, though. The relationship between them was just getting good. I don't understand one thing. ...

    Aug 31, 2008


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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