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I liked the concept but the story was confusing.The repition of the emails was what confused me the most. I read the story thoroughly, but I can't make heads or ...

I liked the cliffhanger at the end. I agree that you should have spaced out the dialouge more. Other than that I didn't see anything wrong with it. I can't ...

This was a very good story. I don't see how they could have suspended you for it except maybe for using the word "bitch." Other than that, nice. Keep up ...

Wow! Very discrptive. Nice work. Jaw-dropping. Hopefully the next will be just as good.

Great short story. Left me begging for more. There needed to be more parts with Conner, though. The relationship between them was just getting good. I don't understand one thing. ...

Very good work. Nice and gory. The only mistakes I saw were the ones already pointed out.