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Re: Letters of the Distressed
I liked the concept but the story was confusing.The repition of the emails was what confused me the most. I read the story thoroughly, but I can't make heads or ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: Demon Hunter- The Beginning
I liked the cliffhanger at the end. I agree that you should have spaced out the dialouge more. Other than that I didn't see anything wrong with it. I can't ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: "Don't look at me"
This was a very good story. I don't see how they could have suspended you for it except maybe for using the word "bitch." Other than that, nice. Keep up ...
Aug 31, 2008 -
Re: Goddess Fallen
Wow! Very discrptive. Nice work. Jaw-dropping. Hopefully the next will be just as good.
Aug 31, 2008 -
Re: The Bloody Quill
Great short story. Left me begging for more. There needed to be more parts with Conner, though. The relationship between them was just getting good. I don't understand one thing. ...
Aug 31, 2008 -
Re: Disney's Sleeping Beauty
Very good work. Nice and gory. The only mistakes I saw were the ones already pointed out.
Aug 30, 2008