thenextwriter

I don't usually read this genre of writing but yours i enjoy. It drew me in much like a story should. I very much enjoyed reading what you have posted ...

I like it very much. There are a couple errors here and there but a person can generally figure them out. I enjoyed it.

Thank you. I appreciate your comments and no i wouldn't say you were harsh i have definitely heard worse. Thank you again.

It isn't bad considering you wrote it on a dare within the time frame of ten minutes. It was confusing at parts but if you go back and reread them ...

This is good. Amazing I should say. I can't say anything else other then please write more and post it.