thenextwriter

I don't usually read this genre of writing but yours i enjoy. It drew me in much like a story should. I very much enjoyed reading what you have posted ...

I like it very much. There are a couple errors here and there but a person can generally figure them out. I enjoyed it.

The following is a idea that came to me a couple days ago. I think it has potential how about you? Its teeth were mingled. They were stained yellow and ...

Thank you. I appreciate your comments and no i wouldn't say you were harsh i have definitely heard worse. Thank you again.

It isn't bad considering you wrote it on a dare within the time frame of ten minutes. It was confusing at parts but if you go back and reread them ...

Max Cross was a young stunning young man. He was a very successful Detective at the local police precinct. Everybody thought that he was the next Sherlock Holmes and that ...

This is good. Amazing I should say. I can't say anything else other then please write more and post it.