themangledsoul

Hey Nanda, really really loved this piece. Especially the lines "ऐ हवा के झकोरों, कहां आग लेकर निकले? मेरा गांव बस सके �

Thank you so much for taking the time to write this. I'll definitely keep your suggestions in mind when writing next time. It's actually a raw piece with raw feelings. ...

Thank you. Really happy to hear that it's somewhat relatable to you.

Thank you so much for taking the time to write this review. I will definitely work on that. This is just a raw piece with raw emotions.

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