themagnificentmilton

Another great chapter sir! I knew Machete would be back! And why not- A lunatic with a grudge is badass! Just another great one, consistent, good descriptions, solid action, varying ...

Its difficult to review this constructively as its so good, so I'm going to nitpick big time. (Small point- you name this Chapter 3, and the others are 'Chapter Two' ...

Okay,Straight to it! 'He had remained behind for a few seconds, pointing to him and drawing his bloodied machete across his throat.' This guy's gonna return again right? It sure ...

Word up, Sandvich. This is like a movie, but with words making pictures instead of pictures. I'm not sure what it is exactly, but this whole chapter has a cinematic ...