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theluckyflower

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Call

    Ellipses! That’s what they're called! I kept trying to remember the other night. Anyways, I'm so sorry, but I forgot to tell you: The scoffers tell me of my downfalls; ...

    Aug 30, 2006
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Nymph, the Spirit, and the Bird

    I am unsure if any of the people who commented on my story will come back and read this, but if they do, here is what I have to say. ...

    Aug 7, 2006
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Nymph, the Spirit, and the Bird

    oh, whoops! Thanks for telling me that. I'm still getting a bit confused on where to put things (which is really stupid, I know). You see, before now, all I ...

    Jul 31, 2006
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A little ditty for the Screaming

    Oh, that sounded so good! I liked it very much. Great job. I just have only one thing to ask: your prostitute monring is "monring" suppose to be "morning" or ...

    Jul 27, 2006
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Stairs

    Thanks for the feedback. It is much appreciated! I'll try to change it later (bad case of writer's block right now). Hope you'll read some more of my stuff like ...

    Jul 26, 2006
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: " 'Woman' on the Balcony "

    Thanks for sending in your comments! I'm glad ya'll thought it was funny. I have to admit I read it myself and thought "Yikes! Too many 'ands'." But just to ...

    Apr 7, 2006


I was promis'd on a time, To have a reason for my rhyme: From that time unto this season, I receiv'd nor rhyme nor reason.
— Edmund Spenser