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Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My First Attempt at a Sonnet
Thank you Zerkk! :smt003 *and Blue Rubies =P
Nov 3, 2009
Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My First Attempt at a Sonnet
Could you guys point out some of the exact errors in a couple lines? I'm afraid that I just don't get what I did wrong, and I'd like to know ...
Nov 2, 2009

Once you replace negative thoughts with positive ones, you'll start having positive results.
— Willie Nelson