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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My First Attempt at a Sonnet

    Thank you Zerkk! :smt003 *and Blue Rubies =P

    Nov 3, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My First Attempt at a Sonnet

    Could you guys point out some of the exact errors in a couple lines? I'm afraid that I just don't get what I did wrong, and I'd like to know ...

    Nov 2, 2009


“Rise like Lions after slumber In unvanquishable number. Shake your chains to earth like dew Which in sleep had fallen on you— Ye are many—they are few.”
— Mary Shelly