thegilliangill

Hey retrodisco Good luck for the contest I'm going to review your work here :D I never liked my name. What kid wants to be called Edmund? I am named ...

Hey Peanut! I'm going to review your work :D My finger tips tingle as they drum against the script. The lines we had practiced every day until twilight I think ...

“Miss, a letter for you,” Charles consoled. We both knew what it was. Charles is our butler, I tell him everything. When flowers started to arrive weekly, two months ago, ...

Jesse, There is something I never got a chance to say to you. It's something that you've been waiting a long time for. This is nice because we straight away ...

Hey Stargazer is really depends what your Ballad is about, I would either put it under lyric poetry, or just under lyrics, but if it tells a story..then you can ...

Hey I am gonna review you for today xD 18th November 2000 Dear Diary, It’s been three years since Dad left home. Nice short opener! I like it :) He ...

I submitted this piece on another account, but I lost my password and couldn't retrieve it. So it's the same piece edited quite a bit. I hope it has improved. ...

Hello. Good grammar? I got you! :D So hey I'm TheGillianGill (That is how I wish to be known) Urm...I might need some help in understanding this site :) Anyone ...

Hey =) I am going to critique your work today. Some of these corrections will be general others will be matter of opinion, it's up to you whether you agree...I ...