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I agree with XxJoJoxX here I am afraid. Whilst it probably made sense to you, to me this was unreadable. As XxJoJoxX said where is your spelling? It is obviously ...

I know it isn't very good, and I am hopless at rhyme, but I wanted to do something that fitted perfectly with the weather right now! Delicate little flakes, so ...

I agree with aqua babe. That really was astonishing. You should be proud with that, there aren't any nit picks. But then again, you caught me up in the flow ...

I think this is a really really good poem. It seems to me that it has a clear message and it has been put across very well. I personally think ...

Overall I think it is a reasonable attempt, and to say you aren't very good at poetry is a lie. Here you have produced a reasonable poem, and with a ...

I think this is really good. I felt the flow throughout, the only one bit that didn't work for me straight off was the second verse, but after reading it ...

First of all, it is a very short poem, and in order for a short poem to work it has to have a clear point. But, however this I find, ...

I agree with wewinwelose. For me, the rhyme wasn' constant and it did sound pretty forced. Although it did end up giving the poem a natural rhythm which is good, ...

Hey I am going to review your work :D This is a good sentence but I think that you could think of a better word than good, it stops the ...

Hey :D This sure is an intersting subject xD. I think it is totally true, makes me think about when I lose my pencil :') Fail! You have hit the ...

Hey I am gonna review your work :D It might be short but thats the idea of a short story ;) Never start a sentence with and! It might work ...

Hey I am going to review your work :D There should be a commar after junior. Ethan a junior and Kevin and senior. You are talking about something different, so ...

I found this really long and draggy. It went a bit too far. But the content is really good, and you really thought about all aspects. Really well done! Just ...

Hey I am gonna review this piece :D First of all I have to say that Slipknot are an epic band! Many of you out there may think that Slipknot ...

Hey I'm going to review your work :D It's an exasperated sigh, not a Martin looked at me with a exasperated sigh, hands on hips, shaking his head. Kind of, ...