thegilliangill

Howdy there! I thought that this is a great start! I really liked the imagery used. I do agree with BelarusBirdy's changes. It just really needs to be proof read. ...

Howdy there! I think your poem has a good start, however I think it is very short, and although it stands well on its own, it could easily be developed ...

Howdy there! I really liked your poem! I do agree that this poem needs a rating due to it's language content but that can easily be fixed. I really liked ...

Howdy there! I've just got to say, first of all, that I really liked the poem, and the content is good. Just a few nitpicks though. In my opinion it ...

I guess you could only define emo poetry as depressing and emotional. Now that doesn't guarentee that it is a bad poem. We shouldn't judge a poem on genre but ...

Howdy there! I read through this poem and I wasn't too keen on it if I am honest, but after re-reading it I saw a lot more in it. You've ...

Howdy there! I've read the poem several times over, and I have to say, it's one interesting poem you've got there. Although it is really short, it is neat and ...

Howdy there! I think this is one of the best poems I've seen for imagery, I am just bursting with comments about it. Firstly, I love how you personify peace ...

Howdy there! At first glance of your poem I really like the layout. Whether it was intended or not the layout of the poem is similar to that of 'hills' ...

Howdy there! I'm going to critique your work today! The first word really drags me in but the second sentence lets it down a little. I wouldn't recommend starting a ...

Howdy There! I love the song one thousand miles by Vanessa Carlton, and knowing it certainly made it easier to understand. To anyone who is reading this and is unaware ...

This is my first piece of poetry since last September so it is unlikely to be good but all criticism welcome. I really want to improve. xD His features so ...

Howdy there! What you have written is okay. It's not to a quality standard though. The moral/idea is good you need to develop. Give descriptions, lengthen this piece. Change your ...

Hai There I have to say I really liked this. I had a poem within a story which made it really interesting. I found the layout very unique and fascinating ...

Hai there! Firstly I really like these lyrics. They seem to flow so perfectly. However at first glance I was worried about the little use of grammar; correction no use ...