thegilbygirl

Thanks for reviewing!! :) Anyway, the whole big block was completely accidental, and when i wrote the story it was in paragraphs, so i need to go back and change ...

Thanks for reviewing! :D The whole thing with the paragraphs, they wern't origionally like that, but thanks for mentioning it, I'll go back to change it. Hopefully that'll make the ...

Thanks!! :) I do agree about the description of the bedroom, I'll go back and edit that. Also, the paragraphs were normal and structured, I didn't realise I was posting ...