thefireinmeisJC

I guess you've found out the hard way that you can never trust me to correct your grammar. It just doesn't work very well. :D Just wondering, how old is ...

Thanks everyone for reviewing as Christmas comes nearer and nearer! I really appreciate it. Of course that doesn't mean anyone else can review my work as well lol. Moony - ...

Ok...that makes much more sense. Sometimes its hard to read a story bit by bit every couple days because you tend to forget somethings.... maybe put even a little detail ...

Thanks to both of you! Its good to know that some things that I thought was clear or obvious in my writing, you didn't understand...I will work on that. I'm ...

ha, I don't want to give up on the story. It was harsh though I want to know all the mistakes I made...even though I have no intention of being ...

I love the plot! Have you written anything yet?