thefireinmeisJC

They continued to call but I didn't answer back. I seemed to at least know I didn't want this person to find me. It sounded like the person was getting ...

This was a nice start! I liked it but I found it very cliche. You start out the song with " Romeo and Juliet" which was like a big red ...

... You're 11? .... *self-esteem drops to 0* I'm jealous. One of these days, you're going to become famous. Trust me. The only advice I can give is to maybe ...

Woot! I liked this a lot. The only thing I found missing was the line "Every step feels like ten miles." I doesn't flow as well as everything else which ...

And you expect me to critique this? I'm really not sure if I can make a review. After I'm done praising how good this was, I'm going to go read ...

Aha, I found this the cutest thing! "Morning, Cika." It was a tom, a wiry brown tabby she didn't know. "G'morning. Am I allowed to chase mice today?" He chuckled. ...

Snarls and screams echoed throughout the neighborhood. Nice start. Me and my family were gathered in the living room keeping as quiet as the grave. Ok, so I'm not too ...

Beautiful, maestro! I really liked this because of the rhyming scheme but after I finished reading, I felt like I didn't understand what exactly you're trying to communicate. The third ...

This has nothing to do with the review but hi! I remember you. I feel like reviewing something (instead of doing homework) so here I am. She loosened her grip ...

First of all: Welcome to YWS! Second of all: This was absolutely wonderful. :D To the review...... In the dark alleyways thieves lingered, waiting for their next unsuspecting victim to ...

Hello! I'm JC and I'm going to be your reviewer today. :D I was roughly thrown to the floor; the blindfold ripped off. I blinked in the dazzling light, my ...

Hi! I'm JC and I'm going to be your reviewer for today.^^ My father once told that when the king weakens, the nobles start playing violent games. His words returned ...

Hi! I'm JC and I'm going to be your reviewer for today.^^ "Katlyn, time to get up." If it weren't for the rays of sunlight grazing her cheek, Kate would ...

Hmm, wonderful peice. First of all: Grammar! Here is your poem with tiny edits. I capitalized every first letter, put spaces in their proper place after commas, and deleted all ...

Joseph!! Yay! Hohum, this was great as usual.^^ I feel terrible for making little nitpicks when everyone else said it was absolutely wonderful with no flaws at all. I hear ...