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Ok...that makes much more sense. Sometimes its hard to read a story bit by bit every couple days because you tend to forget somethings.... maybe put even a little detail ...

This was great of course. The only things that bothered me were: I was glad that the peroxide bottle had a securely fastened lid. I bent down to recover the ...

Small boat in the water. you could somehow eat fish and drink the salt water. the desert has none of that. Would you rather die from the heat/dehydration or die ...

Banned for having a brother the same age as mine

Interesting peice. I basically agree with everyone else. You need more description etc but the main problem is that I had trouble following what was going on. Remember to make ...

Caution: The following answer could and probably will change if asked again in only a matter of minutes due to my *wonderful* memory... Place in this World by Michael W. ...

banned for (to follow suit) stealing my age and technically gender too. :D

Ted Dekker is ok. I don't know if you know but he writes Christian fiction. So, I like him as an author because of that but when I read um...what ...

Hehe!! Thank you, that some one else in the world hates twilight... I think it was an interesting poem despite other people's saying it isn't actually a poem. Which I ...

Lose every sports game all the WAY! I'm not a very sporty person anyway so I would ALREADY lose every game if I had the guts to even think about ...

weird. very weird. So..... 5/10 for you.

Hope you enjoy :D You are very welcome to give harsh reviews. Chapter 2 Wishes never come true. This was reality therefore: 1. There were no such things as genies ...

Maybe this is just me, but what exactly are you trying to convey here? I like the poem, maybe it could be a little longer?, but I didn't truly get ...

*Sorry* same verdict as Part I. It was great though somehow you need to make the beginning paragraph about sleep a little more interesting. I completely skimmed over it to ...

hello, Its interesting though the main problem is that the syllables don't match up. There's no flow to the poem. Just a bunch of words about snow falling...which is ok ...