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  • Aubrey's Raven - Chapter 1

    Hope you enjoy I remember the coldness of the water that hit my face that afternoon. I awoke with a jerk and unfamiliar panting. Everything seemed blurry—a sole outline of ...

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  • Aubrey's Raven - Revised

    Hope you enjoy! sorry its a little long Chapter 1 I remember the coldness of the water that hit my face that afternoon. Some of it found its way to ...

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  • Aubrey's Raven - Chapter 2

    Hope you enjoy You are very welcome to give harsh reviews. Chapter 2 Wishes never come true. This was reality therefore: 1. There were no such things as genies in ...

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  • Aubrey's Raven - Chapter 1

    Ok, sorry about the long wait. I made up my mind to completley start over to make it more realistic as some have suggested. So, instead of chapter 4 this ...

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  • Redemption - Prologue/Chapter 1

    Hi! This isn't quite an experimental story though I've never written fantasy before. From the Prologue/Chapter 1 (haven't decided yet) you can't really tell its fantasy except for one line. ...

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  • Redemption Chapter 1

    Hi everyone! I decided to make the previous part of Redemption the prologue, so this is Chapter 1. Sorry, if I confused you guys on that :/ Also, considering that ...

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  • Guardian Angel (I will change title later)

    Hope you enjoy it! Chapter 1 What: The small mutterings of someone heard by Willow Reed. When: The time was not recorded and isn’t entirely relevant to the story anyway. ...

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  • Guardian Angel (EDIT)

    Ok, for all people who looked at my previous post...you can throw most of that away : - ) Prologue The air was warm. The soft grass twinkled with morning ...

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  • Guardian Angel

    Hey guys. Here's Chapter 2 and 3. I went ahead and paired them up since they are a little short. I hope you enjoy it! Be as harsh as you ...

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  • Worthless, Invisible Children

    I just wanted to see how people liked this since its very short. The idea just popped into my head while I was sitting at the computer...its very short. I ...

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  • Guardian Angel

    Hey guys. Tell me if this is confusing (i know you will anywho) or cliche. I can't write anything boy-girlish so..yeah. Also, I know this will be hard but I ...

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  • Jackson aka Owl

    Hey guys! I have *no* intention of making this into a story right now but I had to write it....the God of writing took over my brain.... I promised myself ...

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  • The Ride of my Life

    Yay! I have finally solved my problem of not being able to keep with a story after Chapter 5!! I shall give up on novels and go to short short ...

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  • Connections Part 1 - Lucy

    Hey guys! I dunno, I'm starting this thing...(yes, another starter) where there's a bunch of extre short stories, letters, maybe even emails that focus on a theme of all the ...

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  • Connections Part 1 - Lucy REVISED

    Hello again! I'm going to go ahead and post a revised version since I feel like Scott did need to be changed and if I could get a few more ...

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  • Connections Part 1

    Hey guys! Its me again. Here's the next part of the story (last two parts where Judd and Scott, this one is Susanne, the mother.) I'm not sure if this ...

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  • Untitled..

    Haha I've been reading so many stories on here, and mine can't even start to compare Oh well, I guess my writing has improved since I've gotten here lol and ...

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  • Diago

    I can't seem to write anything good lately....its quite depressing actually. Anyways, this something I wrote up for the heck of it. I may continue I may not. I'm random ...

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  • Rocky Road

    So, hello everyone! Haven't posted anything lately...I hope this is a good peice of writing lol who knows? Chapter 1 The ruby red carousel glistened in the burning sun, spinning ...

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No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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