thedaydreamer

Hi guys! Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it. I read the comments and will take them into account.

Think of a place where age is not a factor, Where hills and lakes can be made in the blink of an eye, Where wonderful and unique creatures live And ...

Hi there! First thing that I have to say is a really short story. I loved the description in this piece, it was so vivid that I could almost see ...

Hi there! I loved it, simple and explained the situation really well. Keep this up!

This looks like it could be an interesting story. Can't wait to read more, watch out for spellings

Oh my god, I loved it!!! Keep it up and PM me when you're on Chapter 3!!

Heya, I liked the poem, it was refreshing and I agree with crescent about punctuation etc

Hey, I liked this chapter. It was short, and simple. It explained more about the character's past too. The only thing I do have with is the tenses. It may ...

“Justin, wake up!” said a voice. I groaned. Pain erupted inside my head and it felt like my brain was on fire. I heard someone chuckle. “Ant, get a glass ...

Hiya guys!! So, so, so sorry for not being on. I'm back now :)

Thanks for the comments, really appreciate it, blaster219, he woke up at this point. fairygirl, they're sixteen. In England, people go to college at this age. Justin's disabled.

“Justin, are you paying attention?” asked my mum. She had been going on about what I would do when I got to father number four’s house but I knew it ...

Hey SelenaForever and Fairygirl. I love fantasy stories and poems. I don't really have a fsvourite author but I'm currently interested in the Percy Jackson and the Olympians series by ...

Hey guys, I'm thedaydreamer. I'm from England. From a very young age, I've loved reading and I have a very good imagination. I hope to make some friends here and ...