thecolorofthesky

Thank you for the welcoming! I have a whole folder of poetry that I plan to slowly share through YWS. I'm very thankful for all the comments and reviews I've ...

I'm glad you pointed the punctuation out. I'll be sure to revise that. The whole idea of beauty has such a deep meaning to me. I'm glad you found that ...

Thank you so much for reviewing! I took a look at the poem from a different perspective and plan to revise on a few things you mentioned. I greatly appreciate ...

That has a better flow to it. Great job! Happy to review!

Interesting piece. I enjoy the line "I trust her even with my tower in shambles". I recommend revising the line "But I say I know and I shouldn't" because it ...