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thecolorofthesky

That One Girl

  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Broken Men and Makeup

    First of all, I really enjoy the last three lines. You use some very fitting figurative language in this piece. The title is okay, but I would suggest maybe removing ...

    Jun 7, 2016


What a piece of work is a man! How noble in reason, how infinite in faculty, in form and moving how express and admirable, in action how like an angel, in apprehension how like a god -- the beauty of the world, the paragon of animals!
— William Shakespeare