thecherryblossomgirl

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I really like this essay, I think life is full of paradoxes. The only thing I could find was that you used the word "progress" alot, which sounded a little ...

mostly I write sci-fi or historical fiction, occasionally a persuasive essay, a few free-verse poetry...just depending on my mood and my dreams. I think the control that you are talking ...

I liked the pictures of the sky, but try to hold the camera more steadily or get a stand perhaps

This is very beautiful. At first I was a bit skeptical, and then the more I read the more I realized that this is a mature view of a hurt ...

I love your use of words, the diction is fantastic and the sentances have a good flow. Very good description, I feel like I can see everything you describe perfectly. ...

One bright Saturday morning, George noticed an oddly shaped sprinkler in his front yard. He didn't remember installing one, and didn't think anyone else would have. Who would install a ...

Thanks for reading. Actually, I'm trying a new dialogue style. If you've every read any of James Frey books, there is a way to write dialogue like this he spoke ...

Prologue Blackbark Woods was not the sort of place one thought of when dreaming up images of healthy, green trees or small, friendly critters. The trees of Blackbark were actually ...

Prologue: burned bridges They traveled across what was once the Mesquite desert, and now had replaced the California coastline. The land was arid and rocky, nothing grew and the wildlife ...

I like the idea you have about an autistic brother. I also like the part about watching him sleep. Everything could use a little more detail, however. Expand upon why ...

reminds me of Clive Barker's artwork almost, I really like all of it especially the last one!

It was dark. Too dark for humans to exist in. It was the feeling of darkness that plagued the world. I was lying in bed, hoping to fall asleep and ...

Telling a teenager not to do something is a garunteed way to get them to do it. The reason anti-marijuana and abstinence campaigns don't have high success rates are because ...

this may sound selfish, but as a person who was bullied as a child, if you could prevent your child from being the target of hurtful abuse by merely adjusting ...