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Re: Following the Red Thread
Hi this is Book, just like you wanted. This was very interesting. It was very good, except for some bad grammar. I like how Reese's birthday and the only day ...
Mar 12, 2012 -
Re: Wasn't Mine To Take (Chapter One: Before It All)
Great! It really was. You got Amanda's feelings and hurts in very well. One problem is you should revise is going more in depth about her dad and how he ...
Mar 6, 2012 -
Re: Wasn't Mine To Take
It's great. You should check your spelling. You clearly define Amanda's emotions. Defining your character and changing their personality over time will help you make a great book. You also ...
Mar 6, 2012