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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative
    Re: Following the Red Thread

    Hi this is Book, just like you wanted. This was very interesting. It was very good, except for some bad grammar. I like how Reese's birthday and the only day ...

    Mar 11, 2012

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Wasn't Mine To Take (Chapter One: Before It All)

    Great! It really was. You got Amanda's feelings and hurts in very well. One problem is you should revise is going more in depth about her dad and how he ...

    Mar 6, 2012

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Wasn't Mine To Take

    It's great. You should check your spelling. You clearly define Amanda's emotions. Defining your character and changing their personality over time will help you make a great book. You also ...

    Mar 6, 2012


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