theblueteacup

Well, I can't say much of anything but congratulations! Finishing the book is something all authors (and aspiring authors) struggle with immensely. You might laugh, cry, possibly even pull some ...

First off, I really appreciated the way you spaced this out. It looked really well done. I didn't get to read the other chapters before this, but it seems like ...

Excellent story idea, really enjoyed the amount of detail and thought put into it. Some thoughts to consider: 1) I would cut down the sentences by size, watch to make ...