theanderman

Thanks for another review! The word choice could use work, I agree with that. The main image in my head for the leader was that he spoke more than the ...

Thank you for the review! It means a lot. Good luck with your work!

Even at 4 am I groaned at myself XD this just came up as a recommended piece and I didn't see the 8 and oh dear XD I can't apologise ...

Thank you so much Kieren! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. I tried to make it as close to reality as possible, mainly because looking at real world problems ...

Thanks for the feedback EM! It's really nice to hear something. The nitpicks are totally helpful, don't worry at all about that. The voice was partially down to the characters ...

Hey, thanks for the feedback pal! I kind of wish I was skilled enough to write some of the poetry too XD I might try that for my next project. ...

No problem! Glad to see your dedication to making your parody true to its source. It's not easy to work with those limitations. I can't wait to see where this ...

Thanks for leaving something, it's really helpful. As I said to Wolfical above, I was trying for something new for me here, and it shows. Your comments about sentence structure ...

Thanks for leaving something! I was trying something new with this, and it certainly shows. I do agree that some actions/events in this need more justification and explanation. The rest ...