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We will sing this together as we teach the words and learn the ritual Who is willing to give a fatherly role, on a walk to the beauty way. Chanting ...

yes, yes, i daresay i very much enjoyed this piece. It somehow took me until the second read-through to understand the meaning, but its very evident now. You have several ...

Thanks alot for the reviews everyone. Here is what I took out of it. Please let me know what you think, and if you see more errors. Days have passed ...

yeah man really powerful writing. I dig your style - which is clearly your own style, so i applaud you there. I dont think the punctuation has taken away anything, ...

i agreed with some of the posts above. it was a very difficult poem to read. I'm not sure if it was becuase of the punctuation or lack of "doing" ...

ahh my friend adriangarcia you missed the point, you captured the beauty and mistook it for rubbage. How many frost poems are like this, or any of the great poets, ...

I like the picture but it really should have some and cropping of the people. With photoshop you can easily darken the sky, and add blue to the ocean. Contrasting ...

The Stranger Tuesday was quiet. Wednesday the same. I forget about Thursday. But Friday was loud - once again. Johnny started crying about his position in “the gang’s” tree fort ...

I generally dislike punctuation alot however i feel as though this poem could benefit alot from it. An example is here Never know whats Around the bend Never know what ...

Haha, yeah i agree with the two posts above me. Its pretty much not an attempt. But try breaking it up into line breaks and add more depth to it ...

Owen once told the earth the whole story, For his passing was soon to come. The stars, the trees, the grass and even the owls, Heard every last word. But ...

Wonderful poem, i'm having trouble finding the meaning but in my opinion the words are more than meaning here. The trees stripped bare by winter’s hands Rip the skies and ...

Its a really solid poem, you dont have any sentences that really take down the whole piece. No weak parts which is excellent to see. It really reminds me of ...

Days have past and words have not been written. The world has turned and events occurred yet records have not been recorded. I sit here an invisible man as my ...