the_red_gem

If you look at it it mirrors the "Ebb and Flow" of the title. Thank you.

Thank you very very much. I spent quite a few hours on it

Two outlawed souls with flames embedded In their minds; and from a far distance They share their sparks and shredded Thoughts of life to explain their existence ---- Calm Builds ...

Thanks guys. Just as a note: the lines "Scribbled notes / I grab my coat" are meant to sound disjointed to change the feel when she gives up... and the ...

Wasting lines Wasting space My useless words I can't replace Writers block Consumes my mind My muse is lost My thoughts confined Frustration Error Scribbled notes I grab my coat ...

Thanks so much Writersdomain, all your advice will help a lot while I'm trying to fix this up.

She's right you know. There's nothing to fix, I loved it.

I liked this, paticularly the ending. A couple of things though... 1) Bob was right about the rhythm 2) Adding a 'that' to the last line makes it sound better ...

*feels like running round and shouting "they like it, they really like it" but decides against it* Congratulations, being compared to Edgar Allen Poe has just made the highlight of ...

Thanks, The rhyming is horrible at the end, but yeah... I'lll fix it up eventually

Watching days go by like seconds, As the colour slowly fades, My world is black and grey now, Won’t the troubles leave today? Mondays, Tuesdays, Morning, Night, It blends until ...

Stuff I love... this may take some time... - Seeing a friend/family member after ages and ages and realising that somethings never change - Getting an unexpected e-mail/txt/phone call from ...

hehe, see look I posted now, Anyway I loved it. 'Specially the reindeers and the mash-ed potatoes bit. Pure gold

Stuff the order and I have no idea if these will be my favourite books next week but these were the first ones that came to my head as "good ...

Put a little bit of red paint on the roof then crouch in the corner... when someone comes in start shaking and say "He's coming"