thePharmacist19

Quite a hopeless tone going on here. A couple things to think about: --the use of "..." is unnecessary and looks messy. Try to just end lines with one period. ...

the stanza about spelling/grammar/knowledge was the intro, saying basically how the speaker may know very little about these basic rules of life but (as the rest of the poem goes ...

I resent my age as a barrier of knowledge That wisdom is a consequence of time and My written word, unreliable, informal It’s true I know not of formalities, At ...

PROS: --great opening, really caught my interest --the rhyming and tone of the poem is very cool, humorous TO WORK ON: --referencing people/things that readers wouldn't get takes away from ...

I love how direct and terse your style is. I feel the dark humor and the mood coming through well. I few suggestions i have: --spelling 'cause' like 'cuz' doesn't ...