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The concept is very interesting although I feel that the end of poem was very random. "I am a fallen angel and so I dance" to be exact. Your travelling ...

Yes, reading about natural wonders is a very interesting thing. I think you did pretty well with this. Although, my only concern is that it didn't flow very well. The ...

Just wonderful. The reason of beautiful art is through pain, and I think you've definitely captured that.

From what I see on YWS is that most poets have a difficult time not only rhyming but also having every line flow to the next. Although, yours is an ...

You never forget the day when you finally find that one special person that can light the dark corridors of your heart. Because from that day forward, you are cursed ...

Yes, this is an interesting story. Although I don't yet see how this girl is schizophrenic. She actually seems pretty normal and calm to me for a schizo. And she ...

A wonderful start! I'd love to read more as well! It's very suspenseful, and your writing has a great edge to it. The italics really make it great. It's like ...

This is very well-written. Like many, I could feel the pain you were trying to interpret. Although it was more of a dull pain since "unfolding this truth" was shorter ...

Chapter 1 : Falling Rain They say that you can still hear his music echo through the halls. They say that, when you hear it, the notes have the power ...