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This poem is the epitome of cruel beauty. It was dark, haunting, and passionate all at the same time! Bravo! Reading this is like being wrapped into a blanket of ...

Short and sweet. I like it! It's really cute and I bet that girl will love it if you read it to her. Ha-ha. The only error is that.. my ...

Hmmm, this is actually pretty good, especially with the message you portrayed. Good job. Continue to explore new words and welcome to YWS!!

Ha-ha. Your character reminds me a lot like Ariel in the Little Mermaid with all her spunk, beauty, and desire to be independent. And not to mention, her interest in ...

Awww, this kind of situation always breaks my heart. When a girl's best friend hides his feeling and then completely regrets it later on. Your piece was very nice, but ...

I always love it when a writer writes about writing. Ha-ha. :D This is wonderful, and in my opinion, exactly how I feel about words too! The only error is ...

Amazing. Though brief, it says all it needs to say about what poetry is. BRAVO!

This was originally a short story, but I felt it would be better this way. Although, this is like my first real poem...ever. So bear with me! Ha-ha. I know ...

Oi...... This piece needs a lot of work. It didn't really flow well, and as far as spelling and grammar goes....well, it looks like you copied it out of a ...

This is wonderful. Absolutely, positively wonderful. All four essays are amazing and show a style that is both erudite and filled with personality. Yes, you definitely have great talent as ...

An unedited drawing of what my character, Henry Wilson looks like. (Yes, I know. His clothes look really crooked and weird. :? Tell me what you guys think anyway! :D

Oh, this is definitely a sad piece. This could actually be a good novel idea since it section can work as a scene. Although, I really love to know where ...

Wow. This was actually a very interesting piece. Not many people choose to write about a person with short-term memory loss. I found reading this made me quite impatient, which ...

Yes, this is a very sweet poem. A girl can never resist a man who expresses his feeling through art and literature. Great job!

Well I think it's obvious that you've definitely know your character's personality! Although there are some grammatical errors. (but I won't list them since the others already did). Also, if ...